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this is verydescriptive, but also depressing, good work though.

i understand this poem, and yes it is great, i see how you love your dog enought to write apoem about her, i cant really write poems, the spelling looked ...

thank you snoink that helps me understand a little bit more, though it is still confuzing

oh, well that explains it, but i think it would go better in the "other" category

thx

yea im gonna continue this, thx for briniging it up, oh wait nooooooooo my computer crashed it wasnt backe dup a long time agao i think i lost the cool ...

that was very odd, i didnt understand it at all, it seems as if you have no clue what your talking about and just put down random words.... and pleas ...

oh, make a non sonnet version of it then, more descriptive and detailed like what i said (the last part of my post was just an example of how you ...

rock, rock on, w00t what a poem very good peice of work i also heard a song from the internet it started like this "bomb, bomb, bomb bomb iraq......" thats ...

yea, kinda kreepy, good writing, i can see why they seperated, and greg is a perverted child molester....... and downloads illeagal childporn, bad man.... this is a weird story, but ...

oh, then why dont u change the age....

we arent saying that she is youn and innocent just the story, no insult or degrading comments intended

Sounded young... Sounded innocent... Sounds like I might not get into it... But it does sound pretty cute! yea that too

this is a cool story, i wonder what will happen, what gave you the idea to write a bout puppies and dogs with wings that could talk(english,or dog talk)

that was very well written, i sorta understood it, but thats just me, it was good